The Train Ride

Story



[Taken from Internet:]

One day there was this girl named Jessica. She was looking at the train arrival time-table, and found that her train was about to leave. So she ran to the ticket order counter, and quickly bought a ticket. She ran straight to the train. She is meant to catch and made it. When she got onto the train she saw that the only people on the train were these 3 girls. The 3 girls were all sitting on one seat. So Jessica decided to sit on the seat that was across them.

On her way down the aisle she saw that the middle girl was staring at the seat she was going to sit on and the girls that were beside her on either side were staring straight ahead. When Jessica sat down she started to get freaked out coz the girl in the middle was staring at her. Then the ticket-collector came to the girl and said, Excuse me ma'm can i see your ticket?

Jessica replied, Yeah sure.

When the ticket collecter looked at the ticket he said to Jessica, Sorry ma'am, but you have to come with me your ticket is fake.

Jessica said WHAT!? No that can't be! I just bought it 2 minutes ago.

He said Ma'am, come with me, otherwise I will call the police.

So she got up and went with the man and went into his office.

He stared at her and said Look, your ticket wasn't fake. i did that because the two girl that are beside the middle, strangled her to death before you even got on the train!




My first impression on this story is that, it seemed like an urban legend. But still I'm searching for some information about the story.
Source:
http://www.scribd.com/doc/60923738/Haunted-Places-in-the-Philippines

Comments

  1. pers taym ko mrinig tong kwento na to. and yet part ako ng generation xy. lupet tlga ng 90s bro!

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  2. huh? Ang labo ng sentence construction.
    >He stared at her and said "Look, your ticket wasn't fake. i did that because the two girl that are beside the middle, strangled her to death before you even got on the train!"
    >sinong her? cge, pagbigyan na yung her ay si middle girl.
    >tapos? ano nangyari dapat mas hinuli yung 2 girls na nanakal kesa ... haiz.
    Hello 2013 Mr. Lace! :)

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    1. I'm sorry. I'll take the responsibility for not editing it. It should be " ... i did that because the girl in the middle of the two was strangled to death before you even got on the train!" Is it correct? ... Hehehe ... :)
      And for your other question, the story wasn't actually mine. This blog is a collection of Urban Legends from the internet and other external sources like books. I have no idea why the story was written that way.

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    2. ou nga....... my point c mr. lace, hindi nmn xa ung gmagawa ng urban legend eh, kolektor lng xa. at bukod p doon, hindi xa ang author niyan. panu nga nmn niya mallaman kung bakit hindi ung dalawang babae yung hinuli. isip-isip din pag my time.....
      at mr. lace, nbasa q minsn ung isng comment mo minsan n ndi k nag-eedit ng mga stories gling s net, ako p sau, i-edit mo nln lht ng mga nkukuha mo, mali-mali kc yung grammar eh. atska, sensitive mga tao ngayon. lalaitin k agad. hehehe....

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  3. wow! the person who left the second comment really is sensitive about sentence construction and grammar! why not he/she try a one on one conversation with me and let's see then...

    guys, if you think you know better, why not just correct the lapses in your head?

    c'mon! it's 2013 already, we should think before we comment about anything, the story wasn't mr. Lace's in the first place, so, if anyone has a problem with this entry, they better take it out on the person he got this entry from.

    marc

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    1. Ulol din tong gagong to. Mayabang ka e isa ka rin naman. You think you're some kind of grammar guru? "One on one"?? Feeling ka pala e bugok. One on one my ass. Having insights (yes, only insights) about grammar and sentence structure of the English language doesn't elevate you to the pantheon of the real experts. That's a reality check for you you wannabe.

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    2. Ulol din tong gagong to. Mayabang ka e isa ka rin naman. You think you're some kind of grammar guru? "One on one"?? Feeling ka pala e bugok. One on one my ass. Having insights (yes, only insights) about grammar and sentence structure of the English language doesn't elevate you to the pantheon of the real experts. That's a reality check for you you wannabe.

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  4. so anu ganito po ba yun, nag alisan yung mga tao sa part nang train na yun kaya walang tao? or halata nung mga tao kaya hindi sila lumalapit?

    eh huminto na yung train bakit hindi pa nireport nung nagtitiket yung nanyare? baka po isang chilling story lang talaga ito, nothing more, nothing less, pero astig padin
    - ian

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  5. kahit hindi na edit eh nagets ko naman hahaha

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  6. May iba din pong version yan yung sa jeep naman. Pinilit na pababain ng matanda yung isang girl sa jeep dahil yung katabi nya daw ay nasaksak ng ice pick sa loob ng jeep. Anyways thanks for making this blog Sir. Nakakaaliw basahin parang mas astig pa kaysa sa movie na urban legends

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  7. I read another version of this pero nasa jeep naman. I think this rumour circulated around the 90's and a warning to commuters

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